"पहाडियों पर धुंद मे रेल की पटरियों के पास बैठे उस मुसाफिर का इंतज़ार करते रहेंगे जिसे आना तो था कुछ अरसा पहले और जिसके आने का वक्त हमेशा यूँही टालता रहेगा... ................................................."
us intezaar ko intezaar kya kahiye, vo aaye nahi hum bekrar kya kahiye arsa ..ek zamana ...ek zindgi dav par uske liye to lamho ka tha pyar kaya kahiye a new style to see and write poetry in prose..well done pics of rails nice
please separate your hobby which is jointly written in your profile i.e. tou have wrote writtin & reading poems separate it by comma like this writtin, reading, poems you will find more evenues to collect them
Thanks to everone Paramjeet jee, anonymus jee, vipin jee, nirbhik jee, surender jee, mohan jee for taking out your precious time to read and appreciate few lines of mine which have been generated today through some greif and sorrow. special thanks to Mr Rajesh for appreciation and his valuable guiedence to improve my profile.
"पहाडियों पर धुंद मे रेल की पटरियों के पास बैठे उस मुसाफिर का इंतज़ार करते रहेंगे जिसे आना तो था कुछ अरसा पहले और जिसके आने का वक्त हमेशा यूँही टालता रहेगा
bahot masumiyat hai seema ji isme bahot khub............
seemaji intjar karna kitna accha hota hai, but ek limit tak , jada lamba intjar to sirf taklif hi deta hai, isliye ab or intjar nahi, ab ye intjar khatm hona chhiye.ab kuch esa likhiye jo intjar ko bhula de.
14 comments:
Sunar tasveere hai.
savere waali gaadee say chalay aayegay.................
hum aayengay zaroor tumhara dil kahta hai na?
Seema ji,
intezaar ki abhvyakti mein aap ka kamaal dekh raha hoon.Aap sub ko apna fan kis sahajta se bana leti hain........wah
ये ज़िंदगी रेत की तरह हाथों से फिसल रही है,
ये ज़मी पैरों तले खिसक रही है,
बहुत खुश हुए थे हम कभी,
व्ह खुशी आज लफ्ज़ बनके निकल रही है.
बहुत खूबसुरत रचना
Nirbhik Parkash
us intezaar ko intezaar kya kahiye,
vo aaye nahi hum bekrar kya kahiye
arsa ..ek zamana ...ek zindgi dav par
uske liye to lamho ka tha pyar kaya kahiye
a new style to see and write poetry in prose..well done
pics of rails nice
Surender kumar
प्यार कोई व्योपार नहीं
किसी की जीत या हार नहीं
प्यार तो प्यार ही है
रहमो करम का वार नहीं
बहुत खुबसूरत शुिक्रया
best is always in waiting
but
truth is
your words
are highly nearer
rajesh
a suggestion about profile :
please separate your hobby which is jointly written in your profile
i.e.
tou have wrote
writtin & reading poems
separate it by comma
like this
writtin, reading, poems
you will find more evenues to collect them
Thanks to everone Paramjeet jee, anonymus jee, vipin jee, nirbhik jee, surender jee, mohan jee for taking out your precious time to read and appreciate few lines of mine which have been generated today through some greif and sorrow. special thanks to Mr Rajesh for appreciation and his valuable guiedence to improve my profile.
Regards
बहुत खुबसूरत...
इंतजार की इंतेहा होती गर लगे किसी को मतलब उसने इंतजार किया ही नही उसने तो बस समय ही काटा है।
"पहाडियों पर धुंद मे रेल की पटरियों के पास बैठे उस मुसाफिर का इंतज़ार करते रहेंगे जिसे आना तो था कुछ अरसा पहले और जिसके आने का वक्त हमेशा यूँही टालता रहेगा
bahot masumiyat hai seema ji isme bahot khub............
seemaji intjar karna kitna accha hota hai, but ek limit tak , jada lamba intjar to sirf taklif hi deta hai, isliye ab or intjar nahi, ab ye intjar khatm hona chhiye.ab kuch esa likhiye jo intjar ko bhula de.
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