aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapki insperations koi mere dil jaisa dil hai. aap apni lekhni ke dam par meri bhavnao ko yun hi dikhate rehna shayad mujhme itni himmat nahi ke main aapbiti bta pau. mujhe mujhse milane ke is lgataar koshish ke liye dhanyavaad.
इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी, क्या किसी ने देखा होगा बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह, "दिल" जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ??? ye kavi hriday log bhi kya khoob hote hai,aankh me dil ko dhadka diya ..what an horrible transplantation...medical science chahe itni tarakki kare na kare.kavita ne to kar li..dhanyavad sundar shabd sarnchana ke liye
seema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo wakai bahot hi sundar hota hai ,lajawab likha hai ,main to kahata hun ye to wakai mumkin hai dil dhadakane ke liye magar dil mujjasam dhadakana chahiye .....bahot hi sundar bat kahi hai aapne bahot hi gahari sonch hai isme ye muje kafi pasand aaya......
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aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapki insperations koi mere dil jaisa dil hai.
aap apni lekhni ke dam par meri bhavnao ko yun hi dikhate rehna shayad mujhme itni himmat nahi ke main aapbiti bta pau. mujhe mujhse milane ke is lgataar koshish ke liye dhanyavaad.
Rakesh Kaushik
चार लाईन में... कितनी गहरी बात.. खुब..
heart blowing
aaj to wah ki jagah AAH kahna hoga
बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,
"दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा...
sunder...
इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी,
क्या किसी ने देखा होगा
बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,
"दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ???
ye kavi hriday log bhi kya khoob hote hai,aankh me dil ko dhadka diya ..what an horrible transplantation...medical science chahe itni tarakki kare na kare.kavita ne to kar li..dhanyavad sundar shabd sarnchana ke liye
"दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
बहुत खूब ! शुभकामनाएं !
@"SURE" : जहां ना पहुंचे रवि, वहाँ पहुंचे कवि !
दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
bahut khoob....
अच्छी कविता थी, बिंब भी।
behatarin...
kam shabd magar gahari rachna......
दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
दिल और आंखों का यह अंतर्संबंध एक नया कवि यथार्थ सामने रखता है -बधाई !
Bahut khub.
seema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo wakai bahot hi sundar hota hai ,lajawab likha hai ,main to kahata hun ye to wakai mumkin hai dil dhadakane ke liye magar dil mujjasam dhadakana chahiye .....bahot hi sundar bat kahi hai aapne bahot hi gahari sonch hai isme ye muje kafi pasand aaya......
regards
Arsh
बहुत बढ़िया.
bahut badhiyaa
my god.....
touchwood..
in char lineoo me aap ne itna kuch keh diya ki kiya kahee.
very nice
ek bar firse dher sari badhaiya
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