tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post7509783424364165921..comments2024-01-10T20:17:34.221+05:30Comments on kuchlamhe: "इंतजार का लम्हा"seema guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-59829702012157282662008-10-17T18:55:00.000+05:302008-10-17T18:55:00.000+05:30in char lineoo me aap ne itna kuch keh diya ki kiy...in char lineoo me aap ne itna kuch keh diya ki kiya kahee. <BR/><BR/>very nice<BR/><BR/>ek bar firse dher sari badhaiyaMukesh Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12785030120693046928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-52417783972520276962008-09-17T18:24:00.000+05:302008-09-17T18:24:00.000+05:30my god..... touchwood..my god..... <BR/>touchwood..भूपेन्द्र राघव । Bhupendra Raghavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05953840849591448912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-40827168040686101222008-09-17T11:51:00.000+05:302008-09-17T11:51:00.000+05:30bahut badhiyaabahut badhiyaaपारुल "पुखराज"https://www.blogger.com/profile/05288809810207602336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-29427033088053266332008-09-17T03:44:00.000+05:302008-09-17T03:44:00.000+05:30बहुत बढ़िया.बहुत बढ़िया.Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-55202348794665765572008-09-16T21:23:00.000+05:302008-09-16T21:23:00.000+05:30seema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo ...seema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo wakai bahot hi sundar hota hai ,lajawab likha hai ,main to kahata hun ye to wakai mumkin hai dil dhadakane ke liye magar dil mujjasam dhadakana chahiye .....bahot hi sundar bat kahi hai aapne bahot hi gahari sonch hai isme ye muje kafi pasand aaya......<BR/><BR/>regards<BR/><BR/>Arsh"अर्श"https://www.blogger.com/profile/15590107613659588862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-9906914507012872102008-09-16T19:14:00.000+05:302008-09-16T19:14:00.000+05:30Bahut khub.Bahut khub.सचिन मिश्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07382964172201827333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-65457064020437240212008-09-16T15:00:00.000+05:302008-09-16T15:00:00.000+05:30दिल"जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????दिल और आंखों का य...दिल"<BR/>जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????<BR/>दिल और आंखों का यह अंतर्संबंध एक नया कवि यथार्थ सामने रखता है -बधाई !Arvind Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02231261732951391013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-41823525292228753572008-09-16T14:36:00.000+05:302008-09-16T14:36:00.000+05:30behatarin...kam shabd magar gahari rachna......behatarin...<BR/><BR/>kam shabd magar gahari rachna......vipinkizindagihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06698270014124048966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-72442703009567995052008-09-16T14:03:00.000+05:302008-09-16T14:03:00.000+05:30अच्छी कविता थी, बिंब भी।अच्छी कविता थी, बिंब भी।जितेन्द़ भगतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05422231552073966726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-2694008530328660582008-09-16T13:38:00.000+05:302008-09-16T13:38:00.000+05:30दिल"जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????bahut khoob....दिल"<BR/>जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????<BR/><BR/>bahut khoob....डॉ .अनुरागhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191025429540788272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-46629387154191304782008-09-16T12:47:00.000+05:302008-09-16T12:47:00.000+05:30"दिल"जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????बहुत खूब ! शुभका..."दिल"<BR/>जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????<BR/><BR/>बहुत खूब ! शुभकामनाएं !<BR/><BR/>@"SURE" : जहां ना पहुंचे रवि, वहाँ पहुंचे कवि !ताऊ रामपुरियाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12308265397988399067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-8227261021577473732008-09-16T11:54:00.000+05:302008-09-16T11:54:00.000+05:30इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी,क्या किसी ने देखा होगाबेखुद...इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी,<BR/>क्या किसी ने देखा होगा<BR/>बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,<BR/>"दिल"<BR/>जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ???<BR/>ye kavi hriday log bhi kya khoob hote hai,aankh me dil ko dhadka diya ..what an horrible transplantation...medical science chahe itni tarakki kare na kare.kavita ne to kar li..dhanyavad sundar shabd sarnchana ke liyeअभिन्नhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06944616806062137325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-11323168179638876652008-09-16T11:39:00.000+05:302008-09-16T11:39:00.000+05:30बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,"दिल"जब आंख मे धड़का होगा......बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,<BR/>"दिल"<BR/>जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... <BR/>sunder...मीतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299509220827485813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-883806275225715632008-09-16T11:30:00.000+05:302008-09-16T11:30:00.000+05:30aaj to wah ki jagah AAH kahna hogaaaj to wah ki jagah AAH kahna hogaभारतीय नागरिक - Indian Citizenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07029593617561774841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-66450713862860040542008-09-16T11:13:00.000+05:302008-09-16T11:13:00.000+05:30heart blowingheart blowingG M Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03964085330432048085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-153486157597005612008-09-16T09:58:00.000+05:302008-09-16T09:58:00.000+05:30चार लाईन में... कितनी गहरी बात.. खुब..चार लाईन में... कितनी गहरी बात.. खुब..रंजन (Ranjan)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04299961494103397424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-82913374886751068802008-09-16T09:55:00.000+05:302008-09-16T09:55:00.000+05:30aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapk...aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapki insperations koi mere dil jaisa dil hai.<BR/>aap apni lekhni ke dam par meri bhavnao ko yun hi dikhate rehna shayad mujhme itni himmat nahi ke main aapbiti bta pau. mujhe mujhse milane ke is lgataar koshish ke liye dhanyavaad.<BR/><BR/>Rakesh KaushikRakesh Kaushikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09630659559078508400noreply@blogger.com