aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapki insperations koi mere dil jaisa dil hai. aap apni lekhni ke dam par meri bhavnao ko yun hi dikhate rehna shayad mujhme itni himmat nahi ke main aapbiti bta pau. mujhe mujhse milane ke is lgataar koshish ke liye dhanyavaad.
इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी, क्या किसी ने देखा होगा बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह, "दिल" जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ??? ye kavi hriday log bhi kya khoob hote hai,aankh me dil ko dhadka diya ..what an horrible transplantation...medical science chahe itni tarakki kare na kare.kavita ne to kar li..dhanyavad sundar shabd sarnchana ke liye
seema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo wakai bahot hi sundar hota hai ,lajawab likha hai ,main to kahata hun ye to wakai mumkin hai dil dhadakane ke liye magar dil mujjasam dhadakana chahiye .....bahot hi sundar bat kahi hai aapne bahot hi gahari sonch hai isme ye muje kafi pasand aaya......
aap har baar mere dil ko choo jati ho. shayad aapki insperations koi mere dil jaisa dil hai.
ReplyDeleteaap apni lekhni ke dam par meri bhavnao ko yun hi dikhate rehna shayad mujhme itni himmat nahi ke main aapbiti bta pau. mujhe mujhse milane ke is lgataar koshish ke liye dhanyavaad.
Rakesh Kaushik
चार लाईन में... कितनी गहरी बात.. खुब..
ReplyDeleteheart blowing
ReplyDeleteaaj to wah ki jagah AAH kahna hoga
ReplyDeleteबेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,
ReplyDelete"दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा...
sunder...
इंतजार का लम्हा यूँ भी,
ReplyDeleteक्या किसी ने देखा होगा
बेखुदी मे सीने की जगह,
"दिल"
जब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ???
ye kavi hriday log bhi kya khoob hote hai,aankh me dil ko dhadka diya ..what an horrible transplantation...medical science chahe itni tarakki kare na kare.kavita ne to kar li..dhanyavad sundar shabd sarnchana ke liye
"दिल"
ReplyDeleteजब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
बहुत खूब ! शुभकामनाएं !
@"SURE" : जहां ना पहुंचे रवि, वहाँ पहुंचे कवि !
दिल"
ReplyDeleteजब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
bahut khoob....
अच्छी कविता थी, बिंब भी।
ReplyDeletebehatarin...
ReplyDeletekam shabd magar gahari rachna......
दिल"
ReplyDeleteजब आंख मे धड़का होगा... ?????
दिल और आंखों का यह अंतर्संबंध एक नया कवि यथार्थ सामने रखता है -बधाई !
Bahut khub.
ReplyDeleteseema ji aap bhi kya khub khelti hai shabdo se jo wakai bahot hi sundar hota hai ,lajawab likha hai ,main to kahata hun ye to wakai mumkin hai dil dhadakane ke liye magar dil mujjasam dhadakana chahiye .....bahot hi sundar bat kahi hai aapne bahot hi gahari sonch hai isme ye muje kafi pasand aaya......
ReplyDeleteregards
Arsh
बहुत बढ़िया.
ReplyDeletebahut badhiyaa
ReplyDeletemy god.....
ReplyDeletetouchwood..
in char lineoo me aap ne itna kuch keh diya ki kiya kahee.
ReplyDeletevery nice
ek bar firse dher sari badhaiya