tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post4148530267673280320..comments2008-07-25T23:21:32.804+05:30seema guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-10671829443409211882008-07-25T21:57:00.000+05:302008-07-25T21:57:00.000+05:30bahut hi behatareen aur lajawaab rachna hai aapki...<BR/><BR/>Words nahi hai is ki tareef ke liye...<BR/><BR/>MY blog - http://tanhaaiyan.blogspot.comYogeshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15382350910254695035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-2892443085326925062008-07-25T21:37:00.000+05:302008-07-25T21:37:00.000+05:30bahut hi sundar likha haiरंजना [रंजू भाटिया]http://www.blogger.com/profile/07700299203001955054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-74610319301070136152008-07-25T20:28:00.000+05:302008-07-25T20:28:00.000+05:30इन निगाहों के सिसकते इंतजार बिखर जायें कुछ ऐसे ,<BR/><BR/>की मेरी आंखों की नमी भी छीन जाए मुझसे ,<BR/><BR/>आज तू मुझे यूं बेइन्तहा रुलाने के बहाने से ही आ .<BR/><BR/><BR/>bahut khoob......ranjish hi sahi ko yaad dila diya aapne....अनुरागhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02191025429540788272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-3995265963888640242008-07-25T19:57:00.000+05:302008-07-25T19:57:00.000+05:30दिल को छू लेने वाली रचनाvipinkizindagihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06698270014124048966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-43558810236936665612008-07-25T17:07:00.000+05:302008-07-25T17:07:00.000+05:30बेहतरीन रचना.<BR/>अति सुंदर.<BR/>दिल के भीतर गहराइयों में उतरती हुई एक कविता.बाल किशनhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18245891263227015744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-70076593091888472592008-07-25T16:59:00.000+05:302008-07-25T16:59:00.000+05:30बहुत खूब.<BR/>आ<BR/> मुझे फ़िर से छोड जाने के लिये आ<BR/>आ मुझे फ़िर सताने के लिये आ<BR/>आ मेरी सोई यादो को जगाने के लिये आ<BR/>किस किस को सुनायेगे जुदाई का सबब हम<BR/>तू मुझ से खफ़ा है ये दिखाने के लिये आ<BR/>:)पंगेबाजhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14008981410776905608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-43852561109690128942008-07-25T13:13:00.000+05:302008-07-25T13:13:00.000+05:30wow what a impatient waitingrajesh_ghotikarhttp://rajeshghotikar.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-75710721084389163462008-07-25T10:39:00.000+05:302008-07-25T10:39:00.000+05:30तेरी यादों का पहरा मेरी धड़कन पे अब ना रहे ,<BR/>मेरे हाथों से तेरा दामन भी कुछ छुट जाए ऐसे ,<BR/>आज तू मुझपे इतने सितम ढाने के बहाने से ही आ . <BR/>bahut achci panktiyaan likhi hain<BR/>mukhda bhi sunder hai"Surender Ratti"noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-69205805879862158302008-07-25T10:08:00.000+05:302008-07-25T10:08:00.000+05:30हर पल हूँ मैँ आपके आस पास, जरा दिल में झाँककर देख तो लीजिए; दोस्त के दिल पुकार सुनके; पास आने की बस एक बहाना चाहिए।<BR/>nirbhik prakashnirbhik prakashnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-35219873834285367002008-07-25T10:07:00.000+05:302008-07-25T10:07:00.000+05:30Hi seema ji <BR/> i hope you are fine there and i pray with God for your aim . <BR/>Realy nice poeam when i read your poeam then touch my heart and i am cool feel . <BR/>keep it . have nice time <BR/><BR/>thank you .<BR/> Regards :- Ritesh Kumar Chaudhary . <BR/> Doha,QatarAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-30487112675231304242008-07-25T10:06:00.000+05:302008-07-25T10:06:00.000+05:30वाह सीमा जी मजा आ गया कविता पढकर <BR/>Firoz AhmadAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-25896946059831434072008-07-24T22:20:00.000+05:302008-07-24T22:20:00.000+05:30बेहद खूबसूरत...बहुत उम्दा...वाह!Udan Tashtarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-10800148134895781622008-07-24T22:01:00.000+05:302008-07-24T22:01:00.000+05:30मेरी मोहब्ब्त का सिला मुझको मिले कुछ ऐसे ,<BR/>तुझे पाने की तम्मना में जीना दुशवार हो जाए...<BR/><BR/>शब्द एहसास की सराहना करते हैं!विनय प्रजापति 'नज़र'http://www.blogger.com/profile/08734830206267994994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-45133295452600558502008-07-24T17:07:00.000+05:302008-07-24T17:07:00.000+05:30तेरी यादों का पहरा मेरी धड़कन पे अब ना रहे ,<BR/>मेरे हाथों से तेरा दामन भी कुछ छुट जाए ऐसे ,<BR/>आज तू मुझपे इतने सितम ढाने के बहाने से ही आ . <BR/>ye paktiya kuch khas pasand aai. very nice.advocate rashmi sauranahttp://jasvirsaurana.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-39074082773228821722008-07-24T17:02:00.001+05:302008-07-24T17:02:00.001+05:30That's really great creation. i feel it heartly.....<BR/><BR/>"dil ne kiya majbur kuch is tarah ke<BR/>khwabon mein bhi tum aane lage<BR/>raat toh kaate nahi kat ti thi aur ab toh<BR/>dharkanon mein bhi tum samane lage"<BR/><BR/>...Ravi<BR/>Mere Khwabon me<BR/>http://mere-khwabon-me.blogspot.com/Ravihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01554958844857557918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-63282397125712103352008-07-24T17:02:00.000+05:302008-07-24T17:02:00.000+05:30are wah itni achchi kavitayen to abhi padh raha hun ab to roj padha karunga seema ji dhanywad<BR/><BR/><BR/>Mukut Bihari Brandawan Waale bawa ka BhagatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-62039855291497684552008-07-24T16:51:00.000+05:302008-07-24T16:51:00.000+05:30खून के आंसू रोये थे हम<BR/>तेरी सूरत न देखकर <BR/>खुद पर ही बरसे थे हम<BR/>लेकिन अब गम नहीं <BR/>kuchlamhe पर आकर <BR/>भूल गए हैं सब हम <BR/>वाह आपकी कविता पढकर सब दुख दर्द छू मंतर हो जाते हैंमोहन वशिष्‍ठhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00939783274989234267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-43122066995291652772008-06-05T11:53:00.000+05:302008-06-05T11:53:00.000+05:30Seema aseemit hai.daniashans'http://www.blogger.com/profile/06892283132768584075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-86056638835963647932008-05-22T15:51:00.000+05:302008-05-22T15:51:00.000+05:30very nice seema ji,<BR/><BR/>love is blind but us pyar ko samjh pana shyad har kisi ke bas ki baat nhi hai.isiliye uper casper baba ji ka ye sher bhi accha laga <BR/><BR/>sar jhukaogey toh patthar devta ho jayega�<BR/>iitna mat usko chao woh bevafa ho jayega!<BR/><BR/>Mukesh gargAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-31281686562213514142008-05-08T04:22:00.000+05:302008-05-08T04:22:00.000+05:30great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, <BR/><BR/>very-very great seema gImran Jalandharihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12402457100975880751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2493539525482521639.post-33931713286122122622008-05-05T09:30:00.000+05:302008-05-05T09:30:00.000+05:30I Loved it Seema..<BR/><BR/>Every Line is soooooo pure and touching to me..<BR/><BR/>Truely Mesmerizing..<BR/><BR/>archeavAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com